comparative essay 4 5 pages

I have attached my Thesis paper which is already 1 page and what has to be done is the rough draft which is 4 pages. Considering the thesis being a page all has to be done is 3 more pages. But you are more than welcome in editing the thesis as well as shortening it. But it has to be 4 pages as well as a BIBLIOGRAPHY. I also attached the assignment! The bibliography I did was wrong so that has to be fixed as wel