need help revising and editing a paper that need is already but need clearer language

I will upload the sample to follow, my information that need revising and I need for revision tto be made in the listed section of my paper so that it may have the necessary information needed,

The section for revision : Creating Home Families, Supporting Psychological Needs, Provision of Education, and Socio-Economic Programming.

The paper is pretty much written just need the revision to be made,