notes for our essay 1

1- BLUE – need to summarize it to half or less than

2- RED – add source specially addiction. AND check the others.

3- Addiction section make sure to use 2 sources.

4- Add in text citation after every information

5- Add : ACCORDING TO …………… ( INTEXT CITATION)

6- Add more transition words such as MOREOVER, FURTHERMORE, IN ADDITION, AND

7- No passive voice please because I use Grammarly and give me a lot.

8- Use Grammarly program to correct all mistake please.

9- Depression section make it longer a little bit.

THANKS…..