provide a half page comments to attached 2

Attached contains 2 posts. I need to provide comments to each one with a significant addition in about half a page each (maximum).

The replies must highlight something significant in the post and must be associated with the posts’ subject.

PLEASE MAKE SURE OF THE FOLLOWING:

– Wright it in your own words (do not just copy and paste, paraphrasing is mandatory.)

– The replies must reflect and be an extension to the posts.

– Make them in order as: first reply and second reply.