Teacher graded this assessment and gave this feedback:
Please reread your essay, Alot of it does not make any sense. The structure is not understandable.
There are way too many run on sentences and grammar issues. Run your paper through grammarly snd correct all grammar issues. This js collegiate level writing and this essay is not written well
Make sure you are answering all the questions being asked in the assessment
SO CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE THESE CHANGES THE TEACHER HAS ASKED FOR. I will upload thr original Instructions as well