english 101 an essay about agreeing or disagreeing from two characters from a novel

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Do you agree or disagree with Kennedy’s definition of racism in her closing argument (see pages 428-31)? Write an essay in which you summarize her argument and then explain why you agree or disagree with it. If you are somewhere in between agreement and disagreement, you may describe your position in a clear way, but do not have a “wishy washy” thesis that says, in effect, “it all depends…” Use examples from the novel to support your ideas.