review the attached document and provide written feedback. Please phrase your comments objectively and positively. Describe the project, respond with your personal interpretations and reactions, and evaluate by critiquing what you found to be effective and what could be improved.
Instructions: You are required to carefully review the proposals of the document and give substantive feedback in the following areas:
- Problem Identification
- Identification of Important Community Members or Stakeholders
- Proposal to address the problem or need